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My Internet Broke For a Week

Wed Sep 12, 2007, 9:27 PM
  • Mood: Artistic
  • Listening to: Queen - Bohemian Rhapsody
  • Drinking: Orange Soda
And no one noticed because I have been neglecting this page anyway.

I've got a few story ideas and I'm going to jot them down here before I forget them (though I most likely will anyways).

-I'm going to rewrite Jaziraxanya (currently in scraps) entirely--rather than continuing it. I think it needs to start at a bit earlier point in time, as I'm considering having it the first chapter in the book. Maybe earlier that day, or something. She seems ditzy and dumb in that bit rather than unintentionally controlling, seemingly programmed and apathetic. Kind of like a robot (is what she's supposed to be). I want to introduce her better, to show the reader her world, and her apathetic view of her future. I've also thought up two new characters for this series: the first is a deformed cat-boy, one of the member's of the Rebellion's crew. You see, technology exists at this point to alter our DNA, and though it's not exactly normal, it's not uncommon. Most people do it to get rid of nasty genetic diseases or ugliness, but there are a few crazies who feel they'd be happier as part animal, or something. Unfortunately for this poor fellow, his genetics resisted the procedure, and now he looks malformed rather than cute. The second character is the captain of the pirate ship Black Star (working name). She has perfectly straight, strong blond hair that reaches past her butt. And she's tall. And the hair has a mind of it's own. She uses it to grab things, it can float up, even support her weight. Some say she went bald and it's some kind of bionic transplant, others say she's from another galaxy. I'm not really sure with which I'll go with.

I'm also working on editing the part of Michael I had written, and adding more onto it. I'll post what I've got into scraps.

-A short story (or a longer one?) about a secret society called Justice. They act as anonymous vigilantes in a small town. Average people by day, army by night, or some other cover. There's more to it, but I won't say.

-Not sure if I should turn Once Upon a Time (scraps, in there twice. read the older version) into a longer story. It might work better, help develop the characters more, though it might divulge from the classic princess-lock-in-a-tower story. If I get enough ideas, I might wanna do a series. :3

-The final draft of BitchGirl. Story will change a bit, especially the beginning. Ending will change. If you haven't read it yet though, and want to, don't read the end just yet. I'm going to reword it, address the audience much ealier on, and other stuff.

-I also want to write another love poem. It's been too long. I think I should start work on one. . .

-That and a poem on inner strength. I have a few lines I love figured out, but not enoguh to piece it together. It might turn out mediocre though, like most of my poetry.

-I was supposed to write something about Worth and Worthlessness but I never did. I can't think up an idea for that, for some reason.


Anywho, uhm, bye, and stuff.
-n11na

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:iconartysanniegirl:
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:iconbltoaster:
Thank you so much for all your comments. They were exactly what I was hoping for. I really appreciate you taking all that time.:)
:iconadmireddisorder:
Thank you for the comment
Going to make the changes as soon as devart lets me lol
I appreciate it
Usually I don't miss those ^^;
:iconcyryn:
Thank you for visiting my page, I hope you enjoyed what you saw. :)

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"I hope to one day look back on my life and say 'I am proud of what I didn't do.'" Myself, August 01, 2007.
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Thanks for the comments

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Majority of my work is now on this site... Take a peep if u like:
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:iconcannot:
You have no visual art.

Hmmm... :(

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:iconheaven-spawn:
plus my visual art is not any good. behold my old devart account that ahs visual art: [link]

i'd rather focus on my strength than weakness
:iconheaven-spawn:
because i'm not a visual artist. if that makes you sad youre a lazy sack :P

visual artists paint on canvas. with words i paint in people's heads.
:iconive-chan:
Wow, you've got some great pieces of poetry here! I am amazed! These are deep pieces of poetry.

I love it. Keep up the good work.

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